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The Bad Metaphor

by Finn

I was reading a book,
It was untitled,
I think.

It was by a friend of mine.
It was quite good,
Until I stumbled upon the Bad Metaphor:
"...and then it hit me,
like a soap bubble,
floating on a wind of
razorblades and string."

It sort of ruined
the whole story,
Because it was
So true.

So true.

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